Sunday, April 09, 2006
One more good reason to not follow the assignment too literally
I just realized that I forgot to start with the bubble bursting line, but that could only make it potentially more painful. I did enjoy writing "hella" hella times, though. That's right, kids, it is the most annoying word ever.
I hear the voice of my mother on this hella high cliff
I actually hear hella voices, it’s almost as if
My name will be Lonnie for only the next five
Minutes or so, since I’ve been alive
I’ve had hella names and voices that whir in my head
If I could just lick this problem then maybe I could deal
With my relentless quest to have abs of steel
My name is Davey, and I’m hella tired
My MPD always seems to get me fired
Just 50 more sit-ups, then I can go to bed
Time –
I hate writing poetry
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I like your rhyme scheme. And just because it's National Poetry month doesn't mean you HAD to write poetry. :) This actually sounds like something that would be a rap song when you read it out loud.
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